Perfectly capturing the agony and the ecstasy of that fickle fiend, love. I wonder if love was on writerscafe, how many people would accept a friend request and how many would block it. It would probably make my head explode trying to decide. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your thoughts they are always appreciated!
The thing I love about this poem is that it shows the good and bad sides of love. There's the ying and there's the yang. What a great concept to write about, good job. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your review and the time you took to read this.
A tricky concept to most, unforgiving but unforgettable, when experienced feels almost infinite but when lost is if you've lost a part of yourself, so unlucky? If you have ever lost love that word doesn't even come close to capturing the devastation it leaves behind but lucky is the name of anyone fortunate enough to experience it to begin with, it's worth the pain to just know it once......well written poem indeed
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for taking the time to read this and review it. I am glad i was able to make you think abo.. read moreThank you for taking the time to read this and review it. I am glad i was able to make you think about the meaning in this piece.
mostly, we -- the youth -- are much into this so-called "love-thing" which unfortunately, perhaps, not so inadvertently, impact on our lives so badly. yes, it's true, the pleasure can't be found without pain nor the pain's available out there with out the tantrums of pleasure at all so it's quite bewitching to see how frequently love affects as well as effects, & further impacts on each and every one of our lives. however, whatever it does to hearts, love's love that we can't live without. ah.. poor us. very deeply written. nice imagery here, as always,
Hmmmm.....The thoughts are running through my mind now. I guess it could be both lucky and unfortunate. Meaning if you have found the one and this is the person willing to be there for you and love you through whatever then you're the lucky one. But if your situation is one of those where you've been cheated and lied to and given up on, yet you have loved that person through it all thats where it becomes unfortunate. Thank you for sharing and this thought process was definitely needed. Thank you so much for involving the reader in your thought process.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your review. I am glad I was able to make you think.