For all the girls out there searching for the love of their life

For all the girls out there searching for the love of their life

A Poem by Madhav Rathi

Dear girls,

Find a boy who doesn't search for you in the hotel bars but, the one who search for you in the parks reading a book.

Find a boy who doesn't give a damn to "shape of you" but the one who still sings "thinking out loud" for you.

Find a boy who doesn't wanna kiss you in public but, the one who long to hold your hands while taking a long walk.

Find a boy who may not give expensive gifts too often but the one who texts you with long essays of appreciation every morning.

Find a boy who may not be your "Peter Parker" but the one who will be your "Augustus Waters".

Find a boy who may or may not text you every hour but the one who still surprises you by writing letters for you.

Find a boy who doesn't have to say he loves you all the time coz his actions prove it to you every moment.

Find a boy who doesn't just want to live happily ever after with you but the guy who wants to experience all his joys and sorrows with you.

Find a boy who isn't just a bike-lover but the one who is more of a stars & moon lover as well.

Find a boy who not only loves his family but the guy who loves your family too as his own family.

Find a boy who you don't have to doubt on because you know that he'll always be loyal to you, no matter what.

Find a boy who doesn't just have a dream to be with you but the one who wants to achieve all your dreams and his dreams together.

Find a boy who can only be loved and loved and loved...

© 2017 Madhav Rathi


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First sentence instantly had me smiling. This whole thing just feels so true. To me, at least.

Just found a few errors (I hope you don't mind me pointing out), mostly the 'boy who don't' which should be 'boy who doesn't.' Nothing major though, it was just something which can easily be fixed through proofreading. ;)

Overall, it was a nice message. Keep writing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Madhav Rathi

7 Years Ago

Thnxx Rei Cn and a bigger thnku for pointing out the errors coz only after that, I can correct mysel.. read more
Madhav Rathi

7 Years Ago

Correction done, I guess☺
Rei Cn

7 Years Ago

Anytime. ^_^



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This is a beautiful poem for all the girls. Its so nice that you care enough to write this. It shows what a wonderful person. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Madhav Rathi

6 Years Ago

Such a good compliment you gave😊
Donna

6 Years Ago

Your welcome!
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All girls might start finding from now on!!
Splendidly penned here...after all you can say how an appropriate boy can be found😇!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


First sentence instantly had me smiling. This whole thing just feels so true. To me, at least.

Just found a few errors (I hope you don't mind me pointing out), mostly the 'boy who don't' which should be 'boy who doesn't.' Nothing major though, it was just something which can easily be fixed through proofreading. ;)

Overall, it was a nice message. Keep writing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Madhav Rathi

7 Years Ago

Thnxx Rei Cn and a bigger thnku for pointing out the errors coz only after that, I can correct mysel.. read more
Madhav Rathi

7 Years Ago

Correction done, I guess☺
Rei Cn

7 Years Ago

Anytime. ^_^
I really like your thoughts and I agree with it wholeheartedly. Being with someone who values you, makes you feel happy is a true bliss. Most of the girls just 'fall for looks' which I feel they shouldn't. I believe values and compassion is above all. I being a girl with similar thoughts, loved this note. Thank you so much for writing this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Madhav Rathi

7 Years Ago

I should thank you for saying such appreciating words for me😊
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome. ☺
Nice one.. A note for the girls as well as for the boys also in the way how should they be like.. There are so less no. Of boys like u described above, but yeah, one should wish for the best and boys should make themselves best by developing these qualities.. 😊😅

Posted 7 Years Ago


Madhav Rathi

7 Years Ago

Yeah...true sakshi👍
Bro.... Best part is that u tried to show what a boy wants from a girl.... It's really v.gud... Keep it up....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Madhav Rathi

7 Years Ago

Thnxx bro😊

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Madhav Rathi
Madhav Rathi

Indore, Chaawni, India



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A Poem by Madhav Rathi