Fire

The flames devour, smoke billows, wood falls.

The nearby garden fence,

Looks tense.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thankyou for this
i felt the fear of that garden fence in this short swift poem about fire approaching it
thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under comp good luck

[Maddi]

thank you very much

[Addict With a Pen]

Haha! Was not expecting that, I like it.

[alanwgraham]

I really like this one Maddi. Short sharp with a great ending.
Well done. Quite funny and subtle.
Alan
Would you like to have a look at my short poem 'Prejudice'?
Thanks, Alan