Together we are..

Just a poem I made as soon as I signed up here... I thought, 'why not!' So this is the result of me just thinking of something on the spot. Hope you like, please comment? <3

When we tangle our fingers in knots, I know you like me.
When we hold hands in public, I know you like me.
When we kiss in front of our family, I know you like me.
When we stay up all night on the phone, I know you like me.
When we laugh, kiss, eat and share together, I know you like me.
But I like it most when you whisper in my ear "You know I love you."

Author's Note

Is it okay?

Reviews

[Sugar and Spice]

Totally sweet. Be confident hun, its wonderful. Perfect capturing of the complicated feeling of love :)

[ApocalypticChick]

Very sweet... It really explains how people feel when they're in love

[Kim]

Very nicely written and expressed. Like this I too thought it was sweet

[p.kuhl]

this is very sweet. it is innocent, as I feel like your writing should be as a 13 year old.

keep expressing yourself, it's very important. If writing is a way for you to do that, then make sure you keep it up.

this poem is simple, well written, and sweet. good job!