Rewind

Crimson blood falls from the ground

as the scene rewinds. 

You see it going, going, 

back, back, back in time.

A crying girl wipes the tears back onto her eyes,

and she walks backwards out the door,

hit the button faster,

as the girl gets back off the floor.

A blue haired girl retracts the knife from her wrist

as the razor sews back up the cut. 

You can now see the girl as she used to be,

happy and smiling, filled with glee.

Hit the button faster, back into the hospital room

a mother holds her newborn in her arms

you would never see all these problems arise

in her deep-set, cherry-wood eyes. 

Click fast forward, and you see the years fly by

as they lead up to that momentous day

as the girl is lying on her bed

and crimson drops

are falling, falling

to the floor

the girl

couldn't

take 

it

anymore.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

This is insane!!! I've never read anything like this!! Absolutely creative and very clever piece. Outstanding. I'm shelving this one, WOW!

[Admiral Kirk]

Whoa. Just. Whoa. That was like. Whoa. o.o That poem... made me rethink my entire outlook on life... :o WHOA. o.o That's crazy. It's like... the best poem I've ever read... o_o

[Caution In Flames]

Haha thank you!! XD

[Admiral Kirk]

Thou art welcome!!!

[Forever Hidden]

Emotional poem
Lovveee it

[Caution In Flames]

Gracias!! lol