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My frist though when you sat down next to me was: "Oh f**k no".

Then we talked and I started to lighten up.

My mind focused on you and the way you seem to have changed.

Then I remembered our past and old emotions came up.

My Friends were not amused to hear that I would meet with you.

Then I began to doubt the situation and still I hit you up.

My fear is to have a relapse and loose myself again.

Then I sat down in the grass with you and realised I wasn't messing up.

I am sceptical and happy that you are back and hope you stay a litte.

Do you feel the same?

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Nice work. I'm a guy so I don't completely identify with this but I have lots of sisters and I've heard all of them voice these exact concerns on more than one occasion. And not to say absolutely zero guys perceive relationships like this, I can't speak for all of us, but I can tell you that most do not.

It would be a good idea to edit this with an on spelling though... "loose" (lose), "sceptical" (skeptical)

[R.E. Ray]

Sometimes second chances lead to new beginnings. You've captured that here. Love is about taking risks, so why not leap forward?

[KueenSlayer]

Definitely Yes I feel the same. I love the small detail of humor. Amazing lines

[Ghost writer]

interesting format, nice concept it's like a now poem without any link to before, except that we know it happened.

[LadyT]

Thank you, that's exactly the state I'm in right now.

[Ghost writer]

right now.