STILL FLYING
A Poem by
MadalaJose
I am flying; it's murky
I can't see the way
But I am still flying.
© 2015 MadalaJose
Reviews
Beautiful! Three little lines that sing of deep faith. Well done!
Posted 8 Years Ago
Beautiful,keep flying.Someday we will all soar;} Nicely expressed through very short words,but says so much in volumes.Keep fly though we don't see,God's hand will guides you through the murky shadows.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Beautiful,keep flying.Someday we will all soar;} Nicely expressed through very short words,but says so much in volumes.Keep fly though we don't see,God's hand will guides you through the murky shadows.
9 Years Ago
thank you friend for the read and the review
You do not stop flying, you keep going even if the clouds become so snowy, we keep on going on.
Posted 9 Years Ago
You do not stop flying, you keep going even if the clouds become so snowy, we keep on going on.
9 Years Ago
That's right. thanks for the read and the review
Seeing the bright side of things is what makes us move on. Nicely written, and thank you for sharing.
Insight.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Seeing the bright side of things is what makes us move on. Nicely written, and thank you for sharing.
Insight.
I admire this great resolve.
Posted 9 Years Ago
I admire this great resolve.
9 Years Ago
Thank you friend for the review
Determination.....we do not always know, for sure, but trying, relentlessly, enable us to find out.
Great writing!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Determination.....we do not always know, for sure, but trying, relentlessly, enable us to find out.
Great writing!
9 Years Ago
True, determination is the word. thank you
I agree, and the fact that the reader could relate to it in so many different ways I think makes it quites successful. Nice.
Posted 9 Years Ago
I agree, and the fact that the reader could relate to it in so many different ways I think makes it quites successful. Nice.
9 Years Ago
thank you for the comment
Excellent positive image here madala. Unable to see but still awestruck at what you are doing. Well said in so few words.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Excellent positive image here madala. Unable to see but still awestruck at what you are doing. Well said in so few words.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for the review
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Added on September 26, 2015
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Determination
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MadalaJose Lilongwe, Central Region, Malawi
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