Drowning

July 5th, 2011.

Brutal, shaking.

Sinking, slipping.

 

On a ship.

Dying, dying.

Falling, slipping.

 

Crashing, crying.

Dying, dying.

 

Sinking, shaking.

Brutal attack.

Falling, falling.

 

Screaming, fighting.

Trying, trying.

 

Explosions, movement.

Crying, trying.

 

Floating, floating.

Clawing, screaming.

 

Helpless, floating.

Sinking, dying.

Reviews

[Margie F]

As someone who spent time in the water this weekend, I sure am glad I had an air tank on my back after reading this. :) It leaves a desperate feeling. One, I am sure you intended. Well done.