Shed me your Skin

Something else to write. Kind of Doppelganger ish.

 

From the brain to the stem

One Scale or flakes of skin

Show me your truth

Show me you

 

Burn the path

Take control of your life

Lead it to me

Let me see

 

This is the time for change

Bend your mind

Free your will

Bleed into me

 

Shed me no tears

Just shed me your skin

 

Do you even need it anymore?

Reviews

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

Like an onion and the different layers. I really liked this way of describing the ways we hide ourselves, emotions, but once you get to the last layer you find the truth. Nicely written. =)

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Wow, this is straight up powerful and commanding. I agree with AD. Your expressions pull no punches.

"This is the time for change
Bend your mind
Free your will
Bleed into me

Shed me no tears
Just shed me your skin. Do you even need it anymore?" ~ This right here is terrific. I love it.

[Angelic Darkness]

I love this MP. It's dark, raw, and makes one think..who are we really...
does our soul linger, are we really in control of ourselves.

This is a really good poem..AD

[Ravenskald]

what a powerful and wonderful statement

"Shed me no tears
Just shed me your skin"

Love these verses

~R