Feel the Predator

Trying something new. I am a big fan of the World of Darkness, and I used to play Werewolf the Apocalypse. I am trying to capture a similar feel. My picture for this are Vulture's, I like them, they are not really predators unless they have to be.

 

Running, Rushing, Striding

Through anything thick or thin

Slashing, Biting, Striking

Any scent that I desire

 

Running focused through the thicket

Not a soul hears me

Stalking quietly my prey

Given the chance, I’ll take it

 

Running, Rushing, Striding

Nothing can escape my grasp

Slashing, Biting, Striking

Your meat to feed my kin

 

Rushing quickly so you won’t escape

You're mine now

Biting fiercely into your flesh

So easy to tear you apart

 

Running, Rushing, Striding

With the right to do so

Slashing, Biting, Striking

This is my territory

 

Striding swiftly on my land

This is my killing grounds

Striking deadly to your chest

It’s no wonder you fell

Reviews

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

A way of looking at your enemy, striking, striding to get to them. It also goes both ways, but in the end you won, because this was your life, or "territory" very nicely written. ks

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I think you have captured what you set out to do. Great!

Sal