Dance of Perception

How far can you make sence of what is around you. Learning how to, and how far to go. Life, and death, I cover a general subject here.

 

Dance, the dance

Another mirror to shatter

Another mind to explore

 

Dance, the dance with me

Perceptual manipulation

Deep inner resonance

 

Dance, the dancing prism

Of thoughts and colors

Coloring your thoughts

 

Dance, the dancing beauty

Of life and glory

And of course even death

 

Dance, the ever flowing tides
As you move in life

So does the cycle of life

 

Dance, with our Mother

As nature is keen

She always takes the lead

 

Dance, the wave of memories

For one can’t forget

All the Karmic lessons

 

Dance, on the tight rope

Learn to fall down

Then learn how to get up

 

Dance, the ever burning flame

Passions that overwhelm

Consuming even our souls

 

Dance, the dance of pain

The answer of every problem

Lies on a road you experienced

 

Dance, the dance of wisdom

For your hardships holds truth

In every life problem

 

Dance, the dance of sight

See what needs to be seen

Even if you were told not too

 

Dance, the forbidden dance

Taste the truth

Wield it by your will

 

Dance, the Dance of Perception

For we are not blind

We will always be free from are minds

Reviews

[Pink Poison]

I love this. It is so deep and thought provoking. I was going to paste my favorite sections, but that ended up being nearly the whole poem. You have a way of looking at things that is unique...I know we all do, but you put it into words so well. Great job....I did notice in your last stanza, I believe you used the homynym for our "are" inadvertantly. Maybe you meant it that way. Either way it is a great poem.

[The Dark Priest]

I loved the flow of this, the swapping of colors per stanza added to the intensiy and depth and I enjoyed this read.
Write hard!
G.

[Mysty Rayn]

Your poetry is so deep, touching and truely amazing. I really enjoy reading it.

[Display Name]

I enjoyed this Dance, maybe I shall write a dance of my own and see what steps I come up with.

[SacredRose]

Awesome poem. I like how you changed the colours throughout. I just wanted to make a quick comment about the last line "We will always be free to from are minds", I think you meant to write "We will always be free to form our minds". If I'm wrong, and it was meant to say "from" and "are", then I apologize. I figured that if it were my poem, I would want somone to point that out to me as well. Very good poem though :) Keep up the writing! =D