Transcending In Your Dreams

I don't really know whats, what anymore. I am losing my physical sight for a unique sight, but I am waisting my life on this. I will not stray off though, no more fun for me.

 

What I seek, is in me

I search for this daily

 

In my mind, I see

The path it will take

 

In my soul, I wait

For the day it can be

 

In your eyes, I see

Your life like a book

 

In my mind, I gained

The gift of sight

 

In your soul, I know

The path that is best taken

 

In my heart, I’m cold

I threw away my life

 

In my mind, it’s accepted

I traded my life for knowing

 

You will seek

And I will lead

I am the lighthouse, in nothing

 

You will see

And I will show

All there is to know, in nothing

 

You will walk

And I will stand

On the path that is true, and false

 

You will seek

And I will lead

To a land that is true, and false

Reviews

[Gandré]

I absoolutely loved this seeking for meaning for I write this since 3 years..... I am thankful for your reading my new piece, Rhythm Of My Life... and that you liked everything, music and pic. It is easy to post www.imeem.com for music and several sites like bouquet etc for pics. you ca ask me if you need help.

well this poem flow in waves... I really heard the sea...harmonic beautiful waves of lines and small stanzas.. I like that you 've chosen the 2 line-like stanzas I also do it when a poem is deep and short.. what I search is in me is well said. this is a wonderful beginning, for how often we first search on many places but not inside of oneself... hmm In my heart, I'm coldI threw away my life In my mind, it's acceptedI traded my life for knowing ---------this was said and tragical for heart should always be empty and not having heavy thoughts, so I was happy when you give it a tenderness saying in the other half of poem that the path could be so or so wrong or right... for it is always the perspective what we chose and the consciousness what I chose... powerful, suprising exploration of human consicousness. thanks for posting it.
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regards from germany
gandr�

[Display Name]

this is of good merit, it mirrors thoughs of my own

[Jane Doe]

Very well written. A powerful piece. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

[Reeses]

I lyk this one. I had to read it twice. truly a twister. ~Reeses~

[Reika]

The pace is magnificent here.
The colours do well in bringing out the poem.
I really like the last part,
with the grey, green, and blue.
Especially:

"You will seek
And I will lead
To a land that is true, and false"

This was wonderful. I loved it.
=)