Black

My First Haiku for Here.

Night, a little dark

 

Black, when darkness is inside

 

I am one with Void

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

I think this is half senryu half haiku, which speaks volumes in

such few words~Very nicely penned my friend~Fran Marie

[Mysty Rayn]

I can relate. This just seems to say everything about nothing. Wonderfully penned.

[Gandré]

yes pretty. but this is called Senryu for it is interacting with human feeling. not bad at all for first attempt.

[Suhcej]

Really good, it leaves a senstion of what could be next but at the same time it feels like the ending

[Mariah]

I applaud anyone who can accomplish a Haiku with an actual point/meaning. The words flowed perfectly together.

"I am one with Void"

That just kind of lingers in your mind, doesn't it?

[Angel Bird]

You say so much with these few words. It tells a huge story of humankind.
We have been given so much why do we fear to live - why?!
Why are so many feeling empty, or devastated inside. Why is the world of many so dark when the sun smiles into their faces?!
Pretty smart write!