I Will Show You My Mercy

I Will Show You My Mercy Part 2 of Show Me No Mercy

 

Get yourself up off the ground

Groveling for me to take your life

Pathetic, absolutely pathetic

Here is your blade, a dagger is for a coward

Used to stab people in the back when you are not noticed

I will take your life, but

This will not be easy for you to accept

Your life is mine now, I own you

Your life is worth nothing, I destroyed its value

Look at my face when I talk to you

Look me in the eyes when I say this

Your life has been placed in servitude

Your life is mine as I please

You owe me your life now

No more blood will be spilled

Nor anything else costly

A mistake out of you means punishment

Failure is not in option anymore

You will get up from that ground, and dust yourself off

Come, I will have to brake you in

I broke your skin, now comes your will

 

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/MadProphet/276018/ for Part 1

Reviews

[BenightedWhispers]

Powerful and impressioning. >.

[Adela Muresan]

,,Failure is not in option anymoreYou will get up from that ground, and dust yourself offCome, I will have to brake you inI broke your skin, now comes your will,,

The ending is extremely touching. I liked this ,,frank,, and noble poem lots.

Great write.

A.M.

[Monners]

intense and descriptive. i like.