What�s Left of my Shell

What�s Left of my Shell

A Poem by The Mad Prophet
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It is my emotional ward against the world!

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Hallowed from the inside
Reinforced from the outside
Choices from the spirit
Reactions from reality
Sharpness like fire
A ward from all pains
Destroyer of all desire
Crushed old dreams
Confetti of lost soul
Forged from ancient flames
Emerged in darkness
Hallowed filled with void
Memories swirl in decayed vortex
Truth still prevails

Truth shall be spilled

© 2008 The Mad Prophet


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A very good descriptive piece. It says a lot about you. Very raw and real.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is one of my favorites. It's so obsure, yet defined. The emotions coming from it give someone a feeling of being fake. Not someone who they really are. Defeated and withdrawn from who you wanted to become.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your angst fuels sharp verse!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Mad Prophet
The Mad Prophet

Cedar Falls, IA



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