The Blackest Sun on the Rise

Discovery? Knowing that each step in life I act as a filter for negativaty. I take in the bad, and release the good, do you really want to hug that?

 

So I let the day drag on once again

So I finally think about all that I hold back

So then I snap, and break my walls

I seem to have let all my fears catch up with me

I seem to let all my thoughts dwell and swell

I seem to have just shown a side I wish to hide

There I am in front of everyone again

There I am, so why am I here

There I am, but I can’t seem to find there

Changes are to a cur at this moment

Changes are always happening for better and worse

Changes are changes, why bother to change

Then why can I not find myself

Then why can’t I seem to let go

Then why am I talking to everyone again

Should I just let this go on

Should I take the time to see the changes

Or should I leave that in everyone else’s hands

Reviews

[Drum Bum in the Sun]

i like the repetition, it insinuates the theme of the poem without acknowledging the rest. thanx for stoppin by my poems! hope you are well and enjoying the summer!