Silence

it's...a little depressing.

Her plee for help will never be heard

like the backs of these pages, or the song of a bird

as she falls down, down, and slips through the cracks

what would you do if she never came back?

Reviews

[Laura Ex]

i like the simplicity of the nature of this poem.
it's short and to the point, opening a new train of thought for the reader to investigate on their own.
good job. :]

[Alz Alz]

I liked that... very nice!

[Butterflymom]

I really like your style! This is an awesome piece, and has a bit of intensity to it. Great write!!!
You might want to change "plee" to "plea".