Chapter 6: The Next Morning

    The next morning I went downstairs to find my dad sitting at the table with two cups of tea.

      "Morning Macy.  I made you a cup of tea.  Sit sit.We need to continue the story I was telling you last night before I have to go to work.  I got the morning off but there's a lot more story left to be told."

   I sat down at the table and sipped off my nice, warm tea.  He had made my favorite, green tea with some honey and surger. 

      "Ok, where was I last night when we stopped. Oh yes, a family wanted revenge and shot a cannonball through the royal bedroom. Nobody got hurt but they were in grave danger."           I took another sip of tea and leaned back in my chair.  My dad started the story." Cruse had decided it was too dangerous to sleep in the bedroom and had arrangments for them to move to your mom and I's house in the night.  That night when they got there they looked terrible.  Allisha had huge bags under her eye's and Cruse's hair was a knotted mess. Your mother set up their beds as they told us what happened.  Then we all went to sleep. 

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   The next morning we heard a knock on the door. I got up and answered it.  It was one of the palace guards.  We welcomed him inside and he sat down.  We got Cruse and Allisha up and told them he was in the living room. 

     When they got dressed and came out the guard stood up and bowed.  Then he told them this, we have cought the people who were in charge of the attack.  We have them in the dungeon.  It is safe to return to the palace.

   At that moment Cruse's eyes lit up and and new part of him took over.  He was never the same from that day on.

   The power started to get to him.  He felt stonger and the stronger he felt the worse he turned. When he returned to the castle he had practically gone mad.  When he saw that the people in the dungeon were a kid and his parent's, he got this evil glare in his eye.   He told the guards to get a chair and  5 ropes.  When thay returned he told another gaurd to tie the parent's arms behind their backs.

     Then he told the the same gaurd to tie the kids arms in front.  Then he sat the kid in the chair and told the gaurd to tie the kid's legs to the legs of the chair and put a rope around the kid's stomach and the chair.  Cruse then told one last gaurd to go and get a hankercheif.  When the guard came back Cruse took the hankercheif and tied it around the kid's head and in the kid's mouth.

           He the killed the kid's parent's in front of him and told the guards to handle the bodies and send the kid off to his aunt's.  From that day on Cruse had no murcy on anybody.  He even threatend Allisha he would behead her and not even care.

    So now we have found out that kid's name is Alex.  He grew up wanting revenge and now that he has started it we don't know if he will ever finish." 

     Then my dad got up, went upstairs and came back down ready for work.  He gave me a kiss on the forehead and went out the door. 

Reviews

[Uc Amalu Jr]

This chapter is longer than the previous, and is good.

[Macy A. Brown]

i fixed my spelling mistakes

[Dearantlers]

Wow, this is really good. I think it's sad about what happend to Cruse though. Keep writing this, and send me read requests for the next chapters!

[BrynnaW.]

Very interesting althoughthere were quite a few spelling errors. Never mind that, I will share my opinion on this fine chapter. Hahaha:) I liked it! Getting more and more interesting. Keep on writing!

[Niki Wilson]

Interesting chapter :) Great job!