Chapter 5: The Talk

   Once I was home I decided to ask my mom and dad about the queen and king.  Where they good or bad, and why would they kill that guys parents in front of him?

     I walked into the house and mom and dad were at the table reading.  I sat down and said,  "Mom dad, can we talk?"

        "Sure honey. What's up?"

        " Well I went down to the palace to find out some information and was wondering, do you know anything about the story of the king and queen killing a kid's parents in front of him?"

        "Yes, we have," my dad sighed,"We haven't told you the story because you were better off not knowing. But here it goes.  The king and I were great friends. I met him before I met your mom, before he was a king. His real name was Bobby but he hated that name. So he had people call him Cruse.  He met this girl named Allisha.  She was best friends with your mom.  Allisha and Cruse started dating and I became good friends with your mom.  Eventually I asked out your mom and Cruse continued to date Allisha. 

    We all graduated High School but didn't go to college.  We moved out of our parent's houses and we rented a small house together.  Two years later your mom and I decided to get married. Which got Allisha and Cruse to get married too.

  Now Cruse's Grandma and Grandpa were king and queen and took in Cruse after his parents died when he was 16.

Cruse was expected to take over the throne when his grandparents died.

  Well they died a year after he got married and he did take over with Allisha becoming the queen.  Some people were upset the way they were rulling.  Thay weren't taken seriously because of how young they were.

  One family decided thay would try and do something about it.  They got their hands on a cannon and shot threw the royal bedroom.  Nobody got hurt, but Cruse and Allisha were in serious danger."

   My dad then looked at the clock and realized it was past midnight. he had been talking for three hours. He said he would continue the story the next day and sent me to bed.

       

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[Uc Amalu Jr]

A very straight-foward and direct chapter.
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A very straight-foward and direct chapter.
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[Dearantlers]

I agree with BrynnaW. This story is getting more and more interesting. It's really good. I've never heard a story quite like this, which makes it even better. Keep writing it, and send me some more read requests!

[Niki Wilson]

Thats well, grand! Keep pening!

[BrynnaW.]

Three hours!! Wow! First, eventually not eventully. and second, college not collage. That's all there is to fix from what I can explain easily. There was a dialogue problem but I can't explain it well in this box. Anyways, this story is getting more interesting! I am enjoying it! Keep on writing!