Drunken Infidelity

Limerick

Stunning beauty! Her face truly was.
She was shaped more like a lovely vase.
Her steps left footprints of lust.
My marital vows, in dust.
Drunkenness painted her with no flaws.

Liquor whispered love to her hearing,
But when she turned, beer stopped its cheering.
Booze brewed my sins with bare hands!
My shame buried in the sands.
Then, devil took over the steering.

Reviews

[Gee]

I think lines 1,2, 5 should rhyme as should 3,4.
Also the 1,2,5 should have the same syllable count and the other two lines the same but with fewer syllables

[Maclawrence Famuyiwa]

Thanks for your comment I completely agree with you.
In this limerick too terminal words of lines: 1, 2 and 5 are rhymes. So also, for lines 3 and 4.
As for the syllable count: 1, 2 and 5 are 10 syllables while 3 and 4 are now 7 syllables. Thanks.