You cured my lusts

All along I have been deceived to think I was in love, My meeting you however, gives a true definition of what true love really is.

What a beaut!
My mind silently, hopefully aspires,
As you made me terribly perspire,
I am now having troubles to respire.

What a healing!
As my heart cried for your uncommon love,
I was healed by the briefs of your laughs,
All along my eyes were covered with sloughs.

What a beauty!
My eyes instantly exclaimed,
Mine surely one of the many acclaims,
Going, by what your gestures proclaimed.

What a feeling!
As you made your love available for me to trust,
You instantly cured me of my past lusts,
I am now filled with a love never to be lost.

Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

Very nice. I enjoyed the way you build up from "what a beauty" to "What a feeling"; built on trust/not lust, something fleeting vs something you dont ever want to lose

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Apt words. I love it.