I am woman

I am woman

A Poem by Mackenzie Brooke

No I don’t need your help

I can stand out in this world

By myself

 

Fragile and innocent

Portrays me not

But I guess you don’t

Hear that a lot

 

From now on

I run this town

So this is how

It’s going to be from now

 

To hell with the boys club

And male corporate heads

Better watch your backs

Before you all end up dead

 

Not one to be over looked

But one to be feared

So pay attention now

It’s about time you hear

 

 

So don’t be fooled

By my feminine allure

Because I am woman

 

Hear me roar

© 2012 Mackenzie Brooke


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So true! Excellent poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mackenzie Brooke

12 Years Ago

thanks :)
♪The Girl Next Door♪

12 Years Ago

Not a problem :)
This is very sharp but very true as well. I like the proud declaration this poem shouts, and it's all very well written. Kudos to you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this(: I'm a self-proclaimed feminist, so naturally I loved this :P haha. keep writing(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


O.O dont hurt me, dont hurt me, dont hurt me. Lol jk! But this was feirce and empowering! I liked it a lot! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, this one is great. Very inspiring and makes me feel good to be a woman!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved this because it was so empowering it reminds me of the phenomanal woman poem. ^^ Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this a lot. Packed with raw emotion, and worded to suite. wonderful job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha. Loved the passion. Nice job.

First line, first stanza - you or your
First line, second stanza - innocence or innocent
First line, last stanza - do you need the So

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write. Preach my sista! :p

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was good...Seems a little mad at the males....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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About Me Hello I'm Mackenzie (not my real name) and writing is my life. I love to write more then anything. I will never stop writing till the day I die. I went through a very dark period o.. more..

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