Juliet Dumped Romeo

ladies this is your wake up call

Juliet fell in love

head over heels

for her Romeo

 

He charmed her

He loved her

He made her feel alive

 

But Juliet didn't love Romeo as much as she thought she did

 

Juliet needed space

but Romeo was to much

as Romeo ran to her

Juliet walked

 

They reached a breaking point

Romeo wanted to run away

Juliet didnt she decided to stay

 

the Romeo commanded her

he was full of rage

Juliet was tired of it

so she threw him away

 

Reviews

[Remember Courage]

I don't agree with Lunny. I like this a lot. I am not sure if it was supposed to funny but it was to me. I liked especially how he ran to her and she walked i was laughing so hard. This was something new to the whole Romeo Juliet theme. The only Critism i have is that there was the one long line (third stanza) that was random unlike the cute little bundle format. Great laugh Thanks
-Courage

[Lunny]

to be honest, this is too obvious for me... I like the first two parts but the rest not at all.

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing and a wonderful wake up call. Wonderful write!