At War

Bam the fire goes

pop goes the guns

all the soldiers wake

before the moring sun

 

grab your daily rations

load your gun

we are at war my friends

the enemy is a familiar one

 

march through the battle feild

let the battle horn sound

 

blood soiled across the ground

smoke blocks out the sun

were is the enemy have we won?

 

smoke clears

all that i hear

are stinging whispers of gone

look around the battle feild

neither side has won

 

 

Reviews

[DarkShines]

I really like your form. It's easy to keep up with, definitly has a rhythm, and it delivers a clear point that leaves you thinking. Well done =)