Ode to blissful music

Ode to blissful music

A Poem by Mackenzie Brooke
"

every note has a calming affect

"

Blissful Paradise

no problems here

when harsh words come

you block my ears

 

My personal heaven

no room for hate

when my train of thought appears

you block it in its tracks

 

Magical oasis

where happines shines

when bad thought dare come through the window

you shut the blinds

 

But when the words of hate

do enter my mind

you my dear and loyal friend

are always by my side

 

© 2012 Mackenzie Brooke


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This is how I feel about music. Its an awesom write. Music is a way to let go but still come back. Oh the oldies just fill my soul... lol even now I'm listening to bill whithers "give me the beat boys"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thats exactly how i feel about music. I love this. 'Music is definitely an escape and a barrier and you describe that so well

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is so great! I feel the same way when I listen to music, it's like I enter into another world---- like you said in the poem, a "magical oasis." that's so true. awesome job :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yeah, I agree, it is just lovely! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good one!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a lovely little piece. Thank you for sharing such touching sentiments.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Mackenzie Brooke
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About Me Hello I'm Mackenzie (not my real name) and writing is my life. I love to write more then anything. I will never stop writing till the day I die. I went through a very dark period o.. more..

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