As I climb

based of a wonderful hiking trip

Sweet harmony in the air
the song of the trees in my ears

ground rough but smooth
beauty below your feet and above your head

air fresh and knew
smells like nothing
but the scent is more lovely then perfume

Beauty so powerful
I can feel it with my touch

Open your mouth and taste the love
that surrounds this place

Open your eyes to see the beauty
no Picasso can create

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

just awesome well expressed beautiful l

[Lydia]

Very nice and vivid. Well done!

[MoriartyMesa]

I admire the first person view, the emotion and wording, especially "no Picasso can create"

[Lunny]

wow, that is really lovely! very good, love the feeling you set up in the poem. just I got confused at this part - ground rough but smooth - how can it be rough but smooth?