She saw your love as a joke!

"a poem i couldnt help but write"

"your a friend, just a friend, stop look and begin"

 

Now your lost, and slighty confused

you thought she was the one, and lost the truth.

You stick too your opinion, and try to piece it with glue.

Wow, she must have said, you only let her inside your head

soon, soon, maybe you'll get through that lead, that  broken, bruised,

wet, brutalized, antangonized, heart!

 

She saw your love as a joke!

She saw your love as a joke!

 

Face the facts kid, this girl  was broken before you laid your innocent hands on her.

Stop trying to defend her honor, for she has trashed it, and left it  for the perfect medic.

you must not forget it, full fleshed and real, and now you must deal with it.

Stop making it so electric, IF I MUST act like your perfect little methaphor.

then let me get on, and get off this drug induced coma, leaving me on the floor.

 

She saw your love as a joke!

She saw your love as a joke!

 

You just couldnt believe, that she would flirt right in front of your face?

leaving you looking like a utter disgrace, please please, dont try to save me any face!

I  want to feel the shame, and i want to hear you blame, i want to know  your complicated game.

Shout it! shout it! You'll never feel better if your never shout it, and trully feel it.

Dont you get it? Your love was a joke, and you? you just flat out choked.

 

She saw your love as a joke!

she saw your love as a joke! 

 

little little lyric man, must not compete with the big alpha MAN!

Vanity, vanity, f*****g  VANITY! 

When will they stop comparing me to this insanity,  no tattoos?

No cool symbol to remian your own, go home.

and never return, until you've settled into a gym, and trully learn.

Big BIG muscle man, trying to put my face, in those huge f*****g tits.

He had a little bit, to drink, and to think, show the geek some love.

you'll get p***y, make the girls go "awwwww"

 

She saw your love as a joke!

She saw your love as a joke!

 

Now i have to ask, maybe someone above, even though i believe in that, as much as i do as  a heavenly

flying, glorious glove. why cant i find love? and suddenly, it hits me?

Stop running for party,s**t, dirty bunch. and maybe, just maybe you can find love!

DO i sound a little mad? no, actually quite glad that i avoided, that massive black void.

that you call a self-employed, fully deployed, ready, woman.

get off it, the first thing you did this morning was vomit, and stop it,

you get around like a f*****g broken Bop-it.

 

She saw your love as a joke!

She saw your love as a joke!

 

I really hope you read this! I really hope you choke.

I really hope you never give a slive of hope.

You have no rope, YEA, YEA, your falling now!

no more cute boys too grab you, your friends well they...

got sick of you!

HA HA

how does it feel to be the subject matter of my revenge?

Bury towo graves, so i can sleep in. 

 

She saw your love as a joke!

she saw your love as a joke!

 

Get ready, to hold steady, to fully serve this little lady.

You broke my heart, and stepped on it, tell it wouldnt start.

Now give me your heart, for i am black death, helping you smell

every man's last breathe.  the secret behind my curtain of thoughts.

 

Is that I might still love you, now you can scoff, now you can scoff.

 

 

Reviews

[Lindsey]

wow this is a truly powerful poem. I got chills down my spine just reading it. I think this is a great poem and I would like you to keep on writing please.