Hugs

Hugs

A Poem by Dave
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A tanka for those who need a hug.

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When you know someone,
Their past, their present, their dreams,
Embrace all of them.
Let me give you a warm hug
And show that I truly care.

© 2008 Dave


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creates such emotion
power-packed short
hug is the most desired
without any question

hug gives the feeling
much feeling of care
and can be received
from most anybody


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great Tanka in both form and content~WeLl DonE!~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 4, 2008

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Dave
Dave

Charlotte, NC



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