Sing, you soul...

Inspired by a fellow bobblehead...

Was it a broken muse?

Or a broken heart?

What abuse took your soul

-and tore it apart?

 

Ignore what was said,

-or the plans made,

By the ones that hurt you,

-I’ll be your Band-Aid.

 

Is it possible if we’re so far apart?

To have never seen you,

-but to have seen your heart?

To laugh at words,

-I never heard?

To have touched what’s not there?

To see that upon which I can’t stare?

 

Did we both feel pain,

-so that from each other

there’d be something to gain?

A foundation for the adoration,

-of the dedication we both insert

into all our work.

Drawing from the endless spurt,

-of past hurt.

 

There’s a restless beating,

-in my heart and its not ceasing.

Because after the laughter,

-the flame’s feeding,

fueled by the fire of your words.

And I know it may seem absurd,

To think this way.

But that’s okay,

I never claimed

to be more than a bobblehead, anyway.

Head nodding to every word you say,

-because your words have a way

of keeping the day’s pains at bay.

 

At the end of it all, I just have one thing.

Don’t stop writing for anything.

You’re heart’s beautiful, let it sing.

I know mine is.

But minus the fact I can’t carry a note,

I won’t hide this.

My soul won’t be unused.

You got it to sing again,

         -you’re my muse.

Reviews

[Meallea Pomorette]

I just noticed that you really like a smaller font size...

But anyway, I like the words here used here... "muse" reminds me of my favorite Greek mythologies..

Favorite lines:
"To laugh at words,
-I never heard?
To have touched what’s not there?
To see that upon which I can’t stare?"
... this reminds me of our current topic in English which is figure of speech...

"A foundation for the adoration,
-of the dedication we both insert"
... love the words...

"My soul won’t be unused.
You got it to sing again,
-you’re my muse."
... perfect ending...

[MachinaWriter]

Thank you, that really means a lot ^^ I appreciate you taking the time to read this.

[Meallea Pomorette]

Np problem...
(^_^)

[RachelReaper]

this just took me on a little adventure :) and also, it reminded me of a song, almost like a kind of part-lullaby, part-love song. It was very easy to read and felt like a feather easily flowing in the air.

[MachinaWriter]

lol thank you ^^ Thanks for reading my feather-easy lullaby love song. xD

[RachelReaper]

your welcome *curtsies* sorry, i felt like being dramatic

[Southern Cross]

You are so gifted in your ability to create such an easy flow. Perhaps it's the rhyme ..something I have no rhythm with dancing fingers in my prose. Band aids are great .. I may need one myself. Can mine have a happy face or do you only have Spider Man or other hero character ones?

[MachinaWriter]

Sorry, only Hello Kitty ones xD