The Ship of Dreams [part one]

The Ship of Dreams [part one]

A Poem by MachinaWriter
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The first part of a poetic recreation of Titanic, let me know what you think...

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It was nearly time

And though all I owned-every dime

Was set upon the table-

My face was calm, I watched my palm

-and my hand was very stable

 

And when I spoke, to hide my fears

I made another joke

Cuz in one turn, we all would learn

If I would ride that fateful boat

And the German bloke- who’s ticket wrote

My passage out of here

Had laid it down, the previous round

He’d had too many beers

 

Silent- I drew another card

Violent- my heart leapt

Perhaps a little hard

For I knew right away

As I looked upon my hand

That today was my lucky day

I quickly began to stand

 

I slammed it down and all around

The people jump and shout

For the ticket was mine, but I was low on time

And it was quickly running out!

 

“The boat will leave, out to sea

In just another minute!”

I had to run, with what I’d won

Or it would sail without me in it!

 

I grabbed the tickets, and ran there with it

I knew I couldn’t wait

Finally, I soon would see

Me home back in the States!

 

I jumped and screamed,

“Hey wait for me!”

My tickets in my hand

My smile beamed

As I did see

The waiting ticket man

 

“You’re just in time, and welcome sir aboard”

I smiled wide, and stepped inside

As the ship was no longer moored

 

I can’t believe, I’m back at sea

And soon I’ll be back at home

It’s been too long, that I’ve been gone

Traveling the world alone

 

The ship itself, was made of wealth

I’d never seen a thing so grand

As I walked across, the receding docks

Disappeared with the land

 

The whole city had come- it so did seem

To watch the ship depart

For its maiden voyage, the ship of dreams

Had only begun to start

 

I waved and yelled and said farewell

Though there was no there for me

But I didn’t care, I still did yell

As we drifted off to sea

 

“Goodbye! I’ll miss you, make sure to always write!”

I knew it sound absurd

But soon the city was out of sight

With no having heard a word

 

I settled in, I found my room

My heart still beating fast

I was almost home, I’d be there soon

In America, at last!

 

On the upper decks, the rich now slept

In rooms lined with gold

I could only think, if this ship would sink

The treasure the sea would hold

 

I knew now, there was a reason

They called it the ship of dreams

For with all my seasons

Never had I ever seen

Across any land

A beautiful ship, such as this

The largest built by man

 

On every floor, behind every door

Thousands of people dreamed

Of a better life, free of strife

Where everything now seemed

To promise you, that you can do

Whatever it is you seek

Where the poor at last, and the lower class

Can rise above their meek-

Beginnings

Where fortune and fame

Is theirs to gain, and up for the winnings!

 

But to me at least, I did not seek

What others had left to find

I was returning home, after years alone

I’d left so much behind

 

I thought of this, as I sat

Upon the deck, and in my lap

I drew upon a pad

A picture of a father, and in his arms

-He carried a tiny lad

 

I sketched him there, drawing with my charcoal

And on that day, I saw far away

The girl who sought my soul

 

On the upper deck, she stared upon

The ocean and the sun

But of the beauty, those both did have

I knew there was only one

 

For neither the sun or the sea

Could ever hope to compare

To the girl, I there did see

With the fire in her hair

 

“I’m sorry, lad, you must be mad

You’ll never have a chance.”

My buddy said, shaking his head

But, I was stuck in a trance

 

“They call this ship, the ship of dreams

So maybe we will see.”

I whispered to myself.

“Men like us, can only lust

After such women who come from wealth.”

He so replied, hearing my whispered words.

But I will die, if I lie

I prayed for something absurd

 

I prayed to God, hoping he’d demand it

That love would find, and she’d be mine

Upon the great Titanic.

© 2012 MachinaWriter


Author's Note

MachinaWriter
Its a work in progress, I'll probably edit it a lot later. This is just me typing it all out quickly without really thinking about it at all lol So its completely unedited, even from my own thoughts. Basically I'm going to try and recreate the movie Titanic in poetry. No idea why, I just feel like it lol Let me know what you think.

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A great attempt at recreating the movie. I think, from what I can remember, this is spot on. Nicely done, creative write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

12 Years Ago

I was trying to find my copy of the movie to play while I wrote it, but it turns out my copy is in V.. read more
I love works that reinterpret and rexamine others. I think its great. The narration is good. Great Job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


initially i thought you were taking me aboard Titanic but you quickly alerted me to my faux pas in the last lines. excellent write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. This is beautiful. Anyone who has seen the movie can see the scenes as they read. (or I did, anyway.) Anyone who hasn't can get a great idea of what it's about. Wonderful job, as always. The flow of this is beautiful and it really recreated an amazing movie.

Posted 12 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

12 Years Ago

Thanks ^^ That means a lot :)
Very nice. I love the imagery. The only thing I might change is 'For its maiden voyage' to 'For her maiden voyage'. But that's only because I *think* boats are referred to as she. ...I maybe wrong about that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

12 Years Ago

Actually, that's true. Good catch. I'll definitely change that. Thanks for the review as always ^^
wow this is really great already, a very original and inspiring piece, great work as always, cant wait to read more!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Im a sucker for a poem/story!!.. So ofcourse i liked it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

12 Years Ago

Okay, what I find crazy is that there's an advertisement for Titanic in blu-ray on this page now. Ho.. read more
Belinda

12 Years Ago

Hahaha! Well now im curious about what ads will be on my page..
I think that's an awesome idea! You caught my attention that this was about the Titanic movie when you mentioned he was betting on tickets to go back to the states. After that I could really see the character in your writing. You did a good job describing his excitement once he won the tickets.
I can't wait to read the second part.

Posted 12 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

12 Years Ago

Yeah, I love this movie, I literally have the whole thing pretty much memorized lol Not word for wor.. read more

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