I Love You

She says I love you for the first time.

"I Love You"

The words I want to say feel like tin on the top of my mouth.
I haven’t said them in a long time
not to someone like you.
You, you, you, you are breathtaking.
you leave me without words. 
I feel like I have known you for years
I want to hold every piece of you in a little box
Keepsakes for my heart, when you are gone.
you are never gone for long. 
I see you in my dreams, I smell you randomly on the street. 
I feel you next to me, your tough hands where mine fit ever so perfectly.
your body pressed ever so gently against mine.
when I envisioned perfection, I never thought that you would come to mind.
now you are always on my mind. 
love, love, love.
its a word used much too often, but no other word has quite the same meaning. 
I love you, i really do. 
I am madly, and beautifully, in love with you.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' Keepsakes for my heart, when you are gone.~ you are never gone for long.~ I see you in my dreams,~ I smell you randomly on the street. '

Wonderfully worded and shared, this purring poem. Your feelings, imagined or truly experienced, are more than obvious. There's a contented touch to your phrasing, a calm before the storm, An easy style but elegant.

[Mike Cole]

I love you is so much of an overused phrase nowadays and i love how seriously some people remember to take it

[lovlygirl212]

i like it good job keep on writing more :)