Definition of a Broken Heart

here it is

My heart was

Heavy

Heavy

With the pain that was inflicted

My heart was

Worn

Worn

From it happening again and again

My heart was

Hopeful

Hopeful

That you would heal it

 

You didn't heal

My heavy,

              worn,

                       hopeful

heart

Didn't even try

My heart was

Broken

Broken

From its last beating

Broken

From your lack of caring

Broken

From you

Reviews

[Alexis]

I really do enjoy reading your writings, Maddy! This was a good poem and I agree with the things said in the previous review. :)

[Crusaderscross]

Your poems are quite sad and very self relfective on the moment. Pain and regret are present everywhere. But I like the writings. The emotions are really well painted.