Nightmare

Dream to nightmare...

Dreaming

Bliss happiness

Only pure goodness

All is right with the world

 

Waking up

Just one thing

Can awake

And the wrong begins again

 

Torture filled

Suffering

That Can't be stopped

Pain to All

 

Waking up

is not

Waking up

It's a nightmare.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I know just what you mean in this piece, there are times when my dreams look so much better than the real world...but, that's the whole point of dreaming isn't it? lol I have had dreams that I wanted to escape from though. Very nice job on this, I enjoyed.

[Stammers]

I love the last stanza, very powerful, overall it's short and neat to read which puts more emphasis on your words - well expressed and well written.

[Ki]

Actually inspired bu waking up from a good dream...