Mask
A Poem by
Ki
personal as anything can get
The mask
shields
the truth
reveals
oustide the mask:
beautiful
wonderful
friend.
Under the mask
scary
disturbing
The mask shields well
it shields your true
sick self.
© 2010 Ki
Author's Note
This is so personal I literally have a person in mind.
Reviews
me too... i love this and it really describes this person in my mind
Posted 14 Years Ago
I think this is personal considering it and i am glad you feel comfortable telling us(your friends) about it in your poetic words.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I think this is personal considering it and i am glad you feel comfortable telling us(your friends) about it in your poetic words.
Madster, this is so powerful. literally amazing.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Madster, this is so powerful. literally amazing.
Ugh I know the feeling. Short yet to the point, i like it. I like how you put the adjectives on a new line instead of listing them with commas because it made it more dramatic and choppy (which in this case is a good thing) Nice write :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Ugh I know the feeling. Short yet to the point, i like it. I like how you put the adjectives on a new line instead of listing them with commas because it made it more dramatic and choppy (which in this case is a good thing) Nice write :)
Wonderful expressions and truth behind this write. It's so true!
-Will
Posted 14 Years Ago
Wonderful expressions and truth behind this write. It's so true!
-Will
i bet it would be scary to write this! Now I'm wondering who it's about, though I know it's none of my business. all in all, deep poem, Maddy!
Posted 14 Years Ago
i bet it would be scary to write this! Now I'm wondering who it's about, though I know it's none of my business. all in all, deep poem, Maddy!
So hard to write though.. This person is scary to think about.
Posted 14 Years Ago
So hard to write though.. This person is scary to think about.
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