You Were Here

Sometimes I look up

And I don't see

What I thought

Was there.

All I see

Is anything

And everything

Reminding me

That you were here.

The days are long

And heaven knows

Much time

Is gone.

I listen

To this sweet song

And remember

The times

When you were here.

I know I should say

That I miss you

Because of course

I do.

But I also know

That happiness

Is still with you

Just like

When you were here.

Reviews

[Jacob Clifford]

This poem has an unusual structure. It reminds me of the way I structured my poems when I very first started writing poetry. I'm not saying your poem is amateurish or anything of the sort - I'm just making an observation. As for the contents of the poem. . . Relatable, emotional, reminiscent. Interesting work. Keep on writing.

[Hannah]

This poem really shows emotion. I can relate to your writing, it's really rough missing someone. You expressed it well through your writing.

[Morgan Yai]

Thanks so much :)