Silently Loving You

this was inspired by this drama that i recently finished.(:

SiLENTLY LOViNG YOU.

My fingers drum to the rhythm of your song

I nod my head to the beat of your voice

Amplifying through my over-sized headphones.

My eyes are closed and my heart

Is tuned into your soul.

...Memories are like the brilliant times at the amusement park...

I smile and reminisce at what you

Want to convey to the rest of us.

...We are like a pair of lovers....

I drift off to the place we call wonderland.

....Where our love isn't a must, but a should be....

Happiness knocks on the door to my heart

And I welcome it in.

....You stay silently within my mind, quietly embracing lonliness.....

My heart bubbles up and overfills.

Tears of joy escape from my eyes as

The chorus bursts into my ears

And I sing along, letting my voice soar through

 

We have once understood

We have once understood

We have also regretted before

We have also regretted before

Missed out on love

Missed out on love

Then it's hard to start over

Then it's hard to start over.....

 

Our voices merged together like one

...Don't be afraid to be honest....

As our hearts beat in sync,

You sat right next to me,

Strumming your guitar,

...I'm afraid you'll spoil me....

Smiling and singing the song just for me,

Like we weren't a million miles apart.

...We've forgotten the shoulds and should nots....

You were so close,

...Where to find real love....

Yet so far.

....FInd all the regrets back again....

I came back to my world

Just like Alice who woke from her dream

...Give me more of these fragments...

I let out a long sigh as I look for the stop

Button on my orange chromatic ipod

...to piece out the unforseen accident....

The song starts to fade

Like draining colored water

...Lost all my first love memories....

Before I have the chance

To turn off my ipod,

The song comes to a halt.

Reviews

[Renesmee Carlie Cullen]

This is an excellent poece of writing.
I love the way you made the reader feel as though the memory of their first love is fading.
Nice work! :)