I'm Ranting......

I felt obligated to write something because Writer's Cafe was down for me yesterday, and this is what my brain came up with.

    I see your eyes every day, staring into my soul, but missing what's the most important. The fact that every time you look at me, another little piece of my heart breaks away from the rest and is forever committed to you.
    For almost 4 years now, I've been hopelessly devoted to you, but now? I'm not so sure if those 4 years were worth it, because every time you get a piece of my heart, a piece of my brain replaces it. Slowly, my heart is becoming a clone of my brain, telling me you'll never love me as much as I love you.
    So I have a question for you, do you love me?

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

Girl this is great. I love it and its so relatable

[piggy]

This is well written and lovely to read. Thank you very much.

[Drowning with Stars]

I absolutely love that first sentence.