Are You The One?
A Poem by Sunbear
Are you the one
To make me smile
And feel attractive
If for a while?
Are you the one
To light a spark
That warms my heart
From the endless dark?
Are you the one
To hold my hand
Accept me and
To understand?
Are you the one
To be my friend
And teach me
How to trust again?
Are you the one
To hold me close
And wash away
The cold morose?
Are you the one
Who has the key
To loose my chains
And set me free?
Are you the one
To dry my tears
To soothe my soul
And calm my fears?
Are you the one
With the gentle touch
And the tenderness
I crave so much?
Are you the one
With eyes so kind
To love me with
Our souls entwined?
Are you the one
I’m searching for
To hold my heart
Forever more?
© 2014 Sunbear
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This is so amazing. I love the format, how every one ends in a question. It really makes the reader think. Absolutely beautiful!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Chloe!
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The answer should come soon or he will be a fool. Excellent...:)...............
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, Sami
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10 Years Ago
You are welcome...:).......
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This is a beautiful poem. Could almost be a song. It's like a lyrical poem with all the rhymes =)
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, Jessicab!
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I love the rhythm and the innocence of this. It was fun to read. :) Good stuff!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you K-la. Your comments are much appreciated!
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Added on November 23, 2014
Last Updated on November 23, 2014
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