Release

Release

 

The day, fantasy walked in my life

I was perfectly satisfied.

I felt free,

My thoughts released.

There was nothing more, no further need.

 

Words, once just in this mind,

Must be put down on papers.

It didn’t bother me if they were kind,

Because I always liked some haters.

 

The themes were various as weather

Depending on the mood I felt.

But somehow all turned out to be

About my diaphanous lover.

 

Fantasy, all is love?

Of course most of you now will cough.

But, as you can often see,

Most of the writers just want to be!

To be free!

To be loved!

But all they are is broken and caved.

 

The day, fantasy walked in my life

I seemed perfectly satisfied

I seemed free,

My pain released.

And, at least, there was someone my thoughts to keep.

 

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy reading it and it's even worth commenting it.
LG
The Secret Writer

Reviews

[luvs2write]

So true! I loved reading this, thanks for sharing =)

[TheSecretWriter]

Thank YOU for commenting. Sweet profile pic, by the way

[Moon]

Nice poem! You speak the truth most writers just want to be free, to be loved, to be accepted.

[TheSecretWriter]

Thank you! I am glad you liked it!

[Moon]

You are welcome Secret

[Pinkyleeamy]

Nice job. I think sometimes we all seem to forget that our imagination can bring a whole new world to us. Its like when we were kids.. we all used our imagination.. but somehow as we grew older we lost that.. maybe that's y so many grown ups are so uptight.. no fantasy!

[TheSecretWriter]

This is one of the most inspiring comments I've ever read and I'm glad you wrote it under my poem!
Thank you very much and you're quite right with your opinion of up-grown people being uptight!
Thank you. The Secret Writer

[Pinkyleeamy]

You're welcome.. your poem was really great!

[La Luna]

"It didn’t bother me if they were kind" This line really got me, I really think when you write, you shouldn't worry whether its appropriate etc.. As long as you know what you want to convey in that message it doesn't matter. And these lines say it all. Great poem .

Luna..

[TheSecretWriter]

Thank you for your comment and I'm happy you read it!

[La Luna]

You're welcome :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

An enjoyable read. Nice job. ^-^

[TheSecretWriter]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it