A song of dusk and dawn

May this song reach him...

I sing a melody
a song of the dusk
waiting for the dark
to swallow the remaining aurora lights

as silence engulf everything
my world, as small as that northern star
I wonder, can you see it?

like a bird trapped in a cage
how beautiful it might be
to fly into that azure sky
ah! only if I could fly

tell me winds of zephyr
will you take this song to him?
will he ever hear my voice?
will it touch his heart?

even my throat dries up
I'll keep on singing
this melody of my heart
and when the dawn breaks
I'll send my love to you

Author's Note

I don't know what made me write this.. :/

Reviews

[Monatora]

I really loved the vocab you used in this poem!
Azure, Zephyr, Melody, Dawn, Engulf, Aurora, the words seemed 'just right', like it was made to describe what you were thinking (I call these words goldilocks words! They're just so perfect!). This poem carries a lot of feeling and really impresses upon the reader, You're skilled at writing meaning into your sentences. Well done! Loved it.