Papyrus

Furnish the room with ink and paper

 and the bound smell of love

between the lines , artists with words

 penned in velvet covered glove

walk in dreams of past lives,

 follow the flight

 of a white angel  dove

In words I shall find you humming

 heartfelt, kingdoms from  above

Furnish my heart with a book of song

Written in azure ink

Let me find its gold and silver

 thread let me find its  mink

In your sorrows and moments of bliss

let me from your cup drink

Furnish my life with a pen crafters art

Let the chains unlink

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

So many great lines and you bring out so many aspects of why the written word means so much. Love
"the bound smell of love
between the lines"

and

"In your sorrows and moments of bliss
let me from your cup drink"

Isn't that what breaks the chains - feeling we are not alone?

[Cassie Fraga]

AMAZED.... I AM SIMPLY AMAZED.... your words so simple but hold so much depth... BRAVO!! BRAVO!! the flow is gorgeous... **tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Pax Analog]

Eloquent conjuring of the poet's calling & instruments. One has the feeling of all times bleeding into one, the eternal poet's moment linking to a mirrored one. . .

[reflectingus]

Oh wow this is just Brilliant. I don't even care if I stopped to analyze your words, it just flowed so beautifully, I could read it a thousand times. Amazing vocabulary, so song-like, loved it. I'm gonna read it again now.

[zainul]

Who will risk to miss the beauty and power of this lovely poem!
Fabulous write.

[Lena Rossmore]

Beautifully crafted. The imagery is fantastic and I'll definitely read more of your work !

[An owl on the moon]

Amazing dance of words on the page! Loved the feel and flowing form you've created as a celebration of dark letters and light lit pages... thoughts unleashed to fill the world.

[Rhea752]

wow that was absolutely amazing!!! :) LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Soulfulbubbles]

beautiful piece great flow and feeling.

:)

[Extant]

"In words I shall find you humming
heartfelt, kingdoms from above
Furnish my heart with a book of song
Written in azure ink
Let me find its gold and silver
thread let me find its mink"

I think the use of colour is what drew me to this exert . . . The first line gives me the image of remembering someone who isn't there anymore, but you can still read what they wrote and hear them humming the songs they wrote into your heart.The book is bound in silver in gold, still the book is more precious than either.

[Muse]

This writing is very pure...like a beautiful azure...your words are made with a colorful amount of pleasure.......

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