Papyrus

Furnish the room with ink and paper

 and the bound smell of love

between the lines , artists with words

 penned in velvet covered glove

walk in dreams of past lives,

 follow the flight

 of a white angel  dove

In words I shall find you humming

 heartfelt, kingdoms from  above

Furnish my heart with a book of song

Written in azure ink

Let me find its gold and silver

 thread let me find its  mink

In your sorrows and moments of bliss

let me from your cup drink

Furnish my life with a pen crafters art

Let the chains unlink

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

So many great lines and you bring out so many aspects of why the written word means so much. Love
"the bound smell of love
between the lines"

and

"In your sorrows and moments of bliss
let me from your cup drink"

Isn't that what breaks the chains - feeling we are not alone?

[Dean]

A bit idealized, but you express it well.

[Pradnya]

WOW!! this write is completely awesome

[Freedom's Child]

Beautiful, the images used to convey a writers life, thoughts, and emotion are exemplary. "In your sorrows and moments of bliss let me from your cup drink" is awesome.

[ewest1220]

I love your description in this. "Furnish my heart with a book of song." Fantastic!

[Empirik]

This is awesome! I have a kindred with this write, as I know the type of paper you speak of, and, love it in my visual art, however, I feel this way sometimes. That it would be a dream to leave my heart written in poetry, song, or description for the one to find and remove all the stress to living and purpose. To be on our way in a successful nature without the unknown definition of love. I love how every line flows off the next, and the ending, it leaves an independence needed to be happy with thee. I think these are my favorite lines (if I had to choose)

"In words I shall find you humming
heartfelt, kingdoms from above
Furnish my heart with a book of song"

Nice one Moon! :)

[Laura Maidah]

Isn't glove supposed to be plural?


Last three lines are true poetry

[Justin W Price]

I don't generally like rhymed poetry, but this one is a gem. Nice work!

[Audrey Howitt]

Just gorgeous!

[RachelReaper]

Each line is beautifully crafted and noteworthy, but some of my favorite lines were, "Furnish my heart with a book of song written in azure ink" and "let me from your cup drink

Furnish my life with a pen crafters art

Let the chains unlink " These lines especially stood out to me.

[Carolyn Falls]

Very lovely, very heartfelt!