Shredded Cabbage

Goodbye my dear friend

 I will see you at the arc of time

Maybe at the end

we will speak of poetry so fine

With words we ascend

 reading above and between the line

You would mull commend

 of words metre and finding the rhyme

 

Johnny be good mature like a fine red wine

 Johnny be good your words are one of a kind

Johnny be good your words will someday soon shine

Johnny be good master class polish the mind

 

Dear John F let the words flow let it unwind

Write poetry like science was to Einstein

Reviews

Beautiful Moon, so touching, sometimes is it so hard to lose someone, because you felt so close or good with that one, other wise, new doors open, and positivism can grow into a new chapter... Your wisdom shows, how to capture true love in letting go, and freedom...

Wonderful work, keep on penning...

E.L.

[Belle]

Sad to know, one of the Romanticist of WC became Blank Canvass. I wonder what happened. But Moon, you are truly a sweet friend for this tribute.
I love your last line : WRITE POETRY LIKE SCIENCE TO EINSTEIN.
It is a very engaging quote!

[writing mojo]

Love the ending the most, the science of writing is formula and each equation of conclusions has an ode to experience through what ever is relative to reaction...touching piece

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Nice poem I love the last line Write poetry like science was to Einstein, that's a cool way to put it. Keep the writes coming.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That was very cleaver and humorous.

[An owl on the moon]

There is a playful voice that seems to sing through your rhythm and rhyme, which gave me glimpses of cabbages and kings... Love your metaphors and magic.

[G!o]

This is beautiful and touching...i gotta say i am intrigued by the title....

[Nautili]

Nice send-off to a friend, Doors open and close with friendships, it truly is a revolving door. From the time I was 4. my friends always seemed to move away.

I like your "Johnny- Be- Good" refrain.

[khalid]

i like cabbage..it is used here to make different delicious foods specially mahshi but i dont think it can be as tasty as your poem..

[no sun]

I like it and I love the title!