Earth Mother

To all the nurturers out there.

In the morn she would be weaving delicate tales

In the furthest flung sorrow soothing wounds that ails

Fly high your golden ocean flags bring in the whales

Nurturing the dewdrops of heaven she unveils

Every secret chamber of your heart, ship sails

Should you slip and slide she erects silver steel rails

Touching minds and souls forever she never fails

 Paradise lies at the feet of thy mother, holy grails

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and strong description gave honor toward Earth Mother. I like the description and reason for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Celestial Witch Child]

I love this piece, although I do wish that it was written in prose. The rhyming scheme makes it seem somewhat limited... I would absolutely adore to see this poem written in freeform.

[Aehr]

the rhyming was honestly one of the best I have read. Very deep and the imagery is really nice. I enjoyed this.

[Alicia Beavis]

Fantastic job with the rhyming! Never one did it feel forced or redundant. Your diction just added to the beauty of the piece as a whole and made for a very great read! Beautifully done!

[Igor G. Balatsky]

Holy grails are inside and beside us. What the hell are we looking for? That is a perfect writing.

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Now this I can sink my teeth into :))) Absolutely gorgeous writing!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

the indepth spiritual content is thorougly engaging.

[Extant]

Brilliant, and I find that I am always drawn to the serenity and genuineness of your rhymes. What beautiful thoughts you have strung to together from the moonlight in your soul.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully written with awesome smoothness!

[Henry]

silky smooth like the feminine goddess herself.