Earth Mother

To all the nurturers out there.

In the morn she would be weaving delicate tales

In the furthest flung sorrow soothing wounds that ails

Fly high your golden ocean flags bring in the whales

Nurturing the dewdrops of heaven she unveils

Every secret chamber of your heart, ship sails

Should you slip and slide she erects silver steel rails

Touching minds and souls forever she never fails

 Paradise lies at the feet of thy mother, holy grails

Reviews

[Allyson Wolfe]

This is a beautiful piece! Just astounding. I think I've fallen in love with it. In it's perfection I see a beautiful landscape. I can't get it out of my head. I might have to paint it. Wonderful piece!

[Dark Beauty]

Awesome,great discription of Earth MOTHER, love it, keep penning!!!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Brilliant words that bring joy to my heart. Namaste

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice tribute!

[Dean]

A very imaginative look at our basic mother...all the home we have. Very nice writing.

[Pradnya]

i must say the rhyming in ur poems is just so good, i loved this toooooooo

[Serenity Faith]

Your rhyme was spot-on! And it's not easy to do a single rhyme scheme without repeating the same word or the piece to stay on the same topic at hand throughout. Brilliant Moon. The Imagery was full beauty. You have done the "Earth Mother" proud. ^_~

[John]

The same end rhyme throughout creates a sense of expectation, which you reward wonderfully with the line Paradise lies at the feet of thy mother, holy grails.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Very smooth and great imagery, paints a great picture in my mind, love the "golden Ocean Flags" phrase,priceless.

[TheSweet]

This type of poetry is rare, one of a single rhyme. But I really rather like it. You've managed to set a scene of beauty with meaning and for that, I congratulate you :) Thanks for sharing.