Fly

Fly

A Poem by MOON

Take me to that place

Life full of grace

You the one who held my hand

You , the one to which , I ran

 

Reading on a park bench

Keeping me from life’s stench

Endless stories you told

Some so warm some so cold

 

Everyday I see your face

In my heart always a place

For the step in my dance

One moment for your glance

 

I know the stars twinkle with your eyes

I know the spirit never dies

I know you walk me through the night

I know my dreams you give flight

© 2012 MOON


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a touching tribute to someone that really cares about you or was a mentor to you even after they are gone. great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



My whole life I've flown by the moon, which means I've lived by feeling's touch.

Posted 12 Years Ago


really nice poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


A talk with an angel or a true friend. It sounds so sincere and trustful. Perhaps, the last line would be better as following: 'I know my dreams will help you flight'.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow...beautiful!
This took me back to the time when my Grandpa was with me...he meant more than a parent to me! Such people never leave us... :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice poem moon .

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this is about your mother, correct? It's a good poem, very moving.
If I could make one suggestion it would be that the last line read "I know my dreams you give flight"

Posted 12 Years Ago



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