Love

Love

 

The great levelling has begun

Fur coat and threadbare one

You and I were once apart

Now we share a beating heart

All the songs we ever sung

Of loss and grief, those beating drums

Now mocks and echoes what was won

I see you now as clear as day

 Captured by the last sun ray

Every angry word displayed

Whispers as it fades

Universal love comes in waves

Viruses and stark graves

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Isn't it amazing how two people who were so in love can suddenly see every flaw the other has magnified? There is a thin line between love and hate. Good write, Moon. Lydi**

[MOON]

many thanks Lydia , most appreciated , take care stay safe.

[Neville]

heart warming and uplifting say's I... well crafted too by the way...

Neville

[MOON]

Thank you Neville , stay safe .

[zainul]

Lovely poem.Last line offers an infinite appeal and forces to repeat again and again.

[MOON]

thank you Zainul , hope you safe.

[zainul]

You are always welcome,Moon.
You also stay safe and enlighten us through your creative pen .

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the rich, the poor, the angry the sad, the glad...we are all on the same boat now...and it may not be the Loveboat...but love even in our isolation, that and hope will get us through this.
No one is safe...no amount of money can protect us...there is no insulation...but Love for our fellow man will get us through this, and hopefully many more survive and resist the viruses and Stark graves.
powerful write, Moon,
j.

[MOON]

Thank you Jacob , stay safe safe surreal times.

[Chris Shaw]

This virus is a great leveller. Rich or poor it doesn't care. We are all in it together. The repetition works well. A fine write Moon.

Chris

[MOON]

Thanks Chris , stay safe

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely of both lyric and content.
Exceptional work, Moon!

[MOON]

Thank you Jimmy , Appreciate, take care