Silhouette

It comes to pass

All unfolds

Nothing to ask

In the emptiness

This room of space

Hollow hold

Stories untold

Moments of beauty

Moments of sadness

Time at last

To be

The silhouette

That dances free

Alone

And yet

Invisible you are

Two on par

The seen

And Unseen

In Grace

At last

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the idea of this "room of space"

quite the room to get lost in....but with grace...we find our way home...
again i am reminded of my friend...and how often i feel her in the room with me even though she is in infinite space.
j.

[MOON]

Thank you most appreciated will stop by soon.

[Robert Trakofler]

hello moon:) I love your silhouette and it nice that the two of you are together at last... at least for this dance!
mine is always running amok:)

[MOON]

Thanks so much, will stop by soon.

[barleygirl]

This is very beautiful! I love how you use the contrast of dark to light, seen & unseen, etc. which reflects the nature of the moon, whether you're looking from one side or the other, it could be light or dark. You weave this into a graceful analogy with details from life. I love the haunting sound & how you capture many of the ways the moon affects me, too . . . how it makes me wonder & question (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[MOON]

Thank you so much

[brokenwriter]

that poem is so magical and mysterious. I love it

[MOON]

thank you so much appreciate your time

[Chris Shaw]

I've always found silhouettes to have great beauty. They have a mystery about them. I would be inclined to dig deeper. Lovely work.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

Title and poem are awesome. I like how you feel andExpress. You are very talented.

[Neville]

sometimes, upon first sight, that is all one sees, the outline silhouette..look closer and beauty might be found there too.. closer still and there find truth... a delightful poem indeed.. Neville

[MOON]

Thank you so much

[Neville]

my pleasure entirely

[Davidgeo]

This was delightful to me.

Mostly because I wrote something of almost the same sentiment about an hour ago... so... I might be a little biased.

Despite all that bullshit, your word economy is perfect. I'm a big fan of word economy when it comes to poetry. Most people write too much but don't really say anything. You don't have that problem.

[LazerRays]

Ooooohhhhh I love this! So deep with emotion and symbolism. The words are beautiful and so descriptive. I do love the format and setup. This is incredible! Nice work!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Memories of past love will always be right there whether seen or not.
A wonderful poem.

[MOON]

Thank you much appreciated.