Eternity

Eternity

 Your grace is all I have now that you are gone
 I can see your face true love waiting to be reborn
 In the echoes, in the silence, in the dark
 I was shackled , you were the rainbows arc

 Grace is the heart that kept me from falling apart
Grace is in your stories your works of art
Grace walks with me through all time
Grace is the years you were all mine

 Love can flower on a barren plain
 Love can flower it has your name
 I can grieve for the loss of you
Yet you left vistas and a universal view

 That nothing dies when love is key
 You are invisible but eternally with me

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Deeply insightful--and truly lovely.
Profoundly touching, Moon!

[MOON]

Thank you kind sir, so good to see you around.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful write, especially the third stanza...favorite.

I have some people who are still with me, even though they are not.

they will always be..."invisible but eternally with me"

j.

[MOON]

Thanks Jacob always appreciate your comments

[Ruth]

This is so beautifully woven. The recognition of the eternal in such a situation gives a soothing warmth, really liked this MOON :)

[MOON]

Thanks Poppy , will stop by soon take care.

[Ted Kniffen]

There is grace in life, grace in love and grace in this heartfelt poem. Well done.

[MOON]

Thank you Ted much appreciated.

[Lydia Shutter]

Heartfelt sadness in this one. Gentle and tender emotions expressed beautifully. Sorry for your loss. Lydi**

[MOON]

Thank you Lydia , go well.

[An owl on the moon]

The beautiful sorrows flow so tenderly through your words, through your loss, through the lingering light of this everlasting love.

[MOON]

Thanks Craig always look forward to your comments. Take care my friend.

[An owl on the moon]

May your weekend bring you such peace.

[Jimmy Yetts]

You have discovered and beautifully portrayed timeless truth.
A gratifying read!

[MOON]

Thanks Jimmy truly appreciate your thoughts.

[Isabella Ivy]

' You left vista's and a universal view', very nice. It was a pleasure reading your poem. Kind regards, I.I.

[MOON]

Thank you Isabella, will stop by soon.

[Isabella Ivy]

You are most welcome. And you are most welcome to visit :) I look forward to it! I.I.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear friend.
"Love can flower on a barren plain
Love can flower it has your name
I can grieve for the loss of you
Yet you left vistas and a universal view"
The above lines are true and thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MOON]

Thank you so much for your comments , you too kind.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Ayvid N]

I feel the loss and bereavement so gently expressed in each elegant verse. There is acceptance and a spiritual calm emanating from your words.