Eternity

Eternity

 Your grace is all I have now that you are gone
 I can see your face true love waiting to be reborn
 In the echoes, in the silence, in the dark
 I was shackled , you were the rainbows arc

 Grace is the heart that kept me from falling apart
Grace is in your stories your works of art
Grace walks with me through all time
Grace is the years you were all mine

 Love can flower on a barren plain
 Love can flower it has your name
 I can grieve for the loss of you
Yet you left vistas and a universal view

 That nothing dies when love is key
 You are invisible but eternally with me

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

grace indeed. love transcends all. nothing can conquer it. it lives on forever. wonderful sentiment here ... :)

[MOON]

Thank you Pete , take care.

[Sam Gregory]

This is beautiful, truly beautiful. captures how the impressions people make on us never die, and that the memories never truly fit the space they once occupied.holding on to memories, even though itsa mix of emotions, really helps us understand the value of the time we have, and time lost. I think everyone who reads this will cherish who they have a whole lot more. Keep up the good work

[MOON]

Thank you Sam truly appreciated, stay safe.

[Patricia Wedel]

When someone shares their innermost thoughts and
feelings with you... it stays with you... you have
become more than you can be... and yet you have
evolved into a new person who knows loss, but has gained
a persona for all eternity. truly, Pat

[MOON]

thank you , will stop by Pat.

[Chris Shaw]

A very beautiful poem and your final two lines states exactly how I feel. Grief is a painful pathway to walk, but all that love will stay with you.

Chris

[Ardra]

That nothing dies when love is key
You are invisible but eternally with me...

this could be said as true love... the above lines :)
very beautifully done

[MOON]

Thank you , much appreciated

[angelina neves]

so much tenderness! lovely poem...
"You are invisible but eternally with me" - a beautiful image.

[MOON]

Thank you so much.

[Carol Cashes]

The last two lines are true and not sad. Being grateful for love even when it's gone is a maturity that some never achieve. Good on you.

[MOON]

He was precious, grateful for our time together.

[MOON]

Thank you so much for the review.

[Relic]

Grief is a tough thing to go through. It was for me and they'll be more in the near future.

The last two lines here are so appropriate and meaningful to read.

Great dedication Moon.

[MOON]

Thank you , kind Sir always good to hear from you.

[wordman]

the memories will last forever

[MOON]

Yes it does , miss the physical presence but better for knowing him.

[Poetic Beauty]

Love the last two lines in this poem. It brings home the whole feeling of grief in this poem.

[MOON]

Thank you so much.